*Maguri tilted his head back, taking a long deep breath and exhaling softly at the feel of Hibari's kisses pressed to his skin. He shuddered visibly, a thrill shooting down his spine when he heard the zipper on his pants slide down. He looked back down to the dark-haired boy, breath already quickening a little. He was blushing a little, but if Hibari wanted him to do this himself, he'd do it. He set his hands on Hibari's to still them and nudged them aside and pulled off the offending garment himself, having to sit back for part of it before dumping them off the side of the bed and settling between the other boy's legs again*

Better?